Uncovering You: The Contract (Uncovering You, #1)

Uncovering You: The Contract (Uncovering You, #1) - Scarlett Edwards Seriously, it's another 50 shades/Bared to You etc. etc. copy-cat.

She even falls into him when she meets him. A la Ana/Christian and Eva/Gideon. Then he bans the fed-ex guy who accidentally bumped into her (and apologized) from his building. Cause he iz a young gazillionaire who owns his own company/ies. But that's not enough so he extends the ban to all of fed-ex entirely, indefinitely. Or until they can teach their employees to never accidentally bump into any person in a crowded lobby, and prove it to him.

Naturally Ana...Eva...I mean, Lilly is utterly impressed by this and even more impressed when he steps on the elevator and the many people already occupying it remove themselves immediately. Cause, that's hot.

He says 'impressed?' to which she responds, 'they know you'.

Yes, those people who work in his building, for his company, aka his employees 'know him'. Enough to disappear quickly, or 'file out, meek as mice'. He calls her 'astute'.

He also has the blackest eyes she's ever seen, so black she can see the purple underneath, and then compares them to midnight sapphires?

Astute, indeed.

I'm not even going to get into the confusing (and often seemingly pointless) timeline of events which goes from 2014 to 'present day' which is 2013, to six months, eleven years, one month, three months ago and back again from chapter to chapter. Chapters are often less than a page and overall the writing is just meh.

No, thanks. Not going to be continuing and certainly not if the price is going from .99c to $3.99 for a 100 page serial.