Unwrapping Holly

Unwrapping Holly - Lisa Renee Jones Horrible. Poorly edited. Characters have the same conversations multiple times.

The MC, Holly, makes references and ponders about how 'non-vanilla' the H is several times (even though they've only spoken a few words to each other) and yet they have nothing but pure vanilla sex.

There are things that seem like should go somewhere, but don't. Things that seem to already be known or established, but have never been discussed.

It was like the author cut out various scenes from a full-length novel and just slapped them together to make a novella. Without anyone actually going back to make sure those scenes fit together cohesively.

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