Number Thirteen

Number Thirteen - Bella Jewel FML. No...just no. I fucking quit. I don't even care what happens. With any luck, they all die and the book spontaneously combusts so nobody else has to suffer through it. Sorry peeps, but as much as I'd love to save you, I ain't takin that bullet.


Boring, stupid, inconsistent and in desperate need of an editor. Preferably, a really mean honest one who understands how to use commas, how that silly thing called a plot works and what a homophone is.

JFTR, I tried another book by this author ([b:Hell's Knights|18211118|Hell's Knights (The MC Sinners, #1)|Bella Jewel||25632486]) and DNF'd that one at under 20% because of poor writing and editing. I gave this book a shot because the synopsis sounded cool - it's not - and it looked like she's got quite a few books under her belt at this point so maybe the writing/editing would be up to par - they're not.

I'm sure there are readers who enjoyed this book or this authors work and that's great. I am not one of them and won't be purchasing any more of her books in the future. Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice? Yeah, you know how it goes.

I'm sure this seems overly bitchy but I just finished a few really well-written books and frankly, I'm sick of spending my time and money on books like this. So, whatever. I'm over it.